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AT-bloom enchantix head

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i was done but i was very lazy to submit it hahah :XD:

ok this was an AT with -->:devruscollgirl: sorry for long wait :(

hop ya like it!
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Since you asked my opinion going to submit is as a critique, hope you don't mind <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

I will start saying the things I like:
First of all: I like how you shaded her hair. I tried that on my drawings, I don't think I got a good result, but you made it look perfect! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>
2nd: I also think the eyes are, they're usually really hard to do, and you good them perfect! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>
3rd: Linearting is almost perfect! The lines are really soft, however It could be better If you use a bit the pressure tool on SAI, They make the lines more soft and pretty <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Also there's some things I don't like:
Her jaws and chin looks a bit wreid If you know what I mean <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/> Maybe trying to make it a bit more pointed?(it's how I think how to say it in english <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/>)
The Nose is kinda too away from her lips, try to do closer <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>
And the blue hearts are on totally different sizes, I know they're hard to keep in the same size so I guess I'm not the one to talk XD

Other than that good job! ^^